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Monday, November 16, 2009

Huhh.. Blaahh

I can see the sky becoming blood red,
And the sea became black.
Everything I look seem to be sad,
The lonely tree and the crying bird on it.

I can see that feeling comes again.
Spreading through my hands, legs,
Laughing at me, as if it will rule me forever.
I can feel that I'm getting weak,
As it holds me stronger and stronger.

It reminds me a place once I was,
which gave me a lot of pain.
I can see them waiting for me
of course my blood, But they value my sadness more.

But when I think about the reasons,
Is that the reasons what matters?
Or is that my foolishness to let someone know those.

20 comments:

  1. nice post... i really liked the way u began it.. i mean d first stanza :) .....and yeah rather than disclosing d reasons, its sometimes better to hide

    :)

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  2. nice one..i did like the title..i want a happie happie post frm u yaar!!! looong tym!:)

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  3. @ Nesi
    Thank you :P :)

    @ Divsi
    :) :) :) :) Only for you :)

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  4. da..nice..bt change d title..k.:)

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  5. da..pinne update a happie happie post fast ..:P

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  6. hmmm...dis is really gud..
    oh i din knw u had so much pain inside u... ;)
    nw i wont tease u dear..
    keep postin, itz nt often dat one gets to read dis kinda work..

    Cherrzzz!!! :)

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  7. @ Niska
    Thank you. And I'm not sad.

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  8. very nice...your words live upto ur feelings...nicely potrayed

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  9. Very well put together. The voice contained in it is unique and not monotonous. Open form is hard for many to learn but great job.

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  10. @ Angel
    Thank you :)

    @ Jessi
    Thank you. Welcome to my blog. Visit often :) Have fun :)

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  11. I want a happy post soon too :)

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  12. @ Dhanya
    I'll try dear :) Thank you. :)

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  13. Good one... specially loved the last lines, those r thoughts that were confusing me at one point of time...

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  14. "I can see that feeling comes again.
    Spreading through my hands, legs,
    Laughing at me, as if it will rule me forever.
    I can feel that I'm getting weak,
    As it holds me stronger and stronger."

    ...I believ you wrote this one poem after a Mastr...tion Session!

    :)

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  15. emotional...like reading out someones worst feelings!gud1

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  16. @ Zadiya
    So you saw my comment on nesi's blog. hehe. Thank you for visiting.

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